Keep it coming. these is a great story..
Keep it coming. these is a great story..
Merry Christmas!
Now i´ve read the whole thing. Great story! But it ends quite abruptly, is there more?
great story keep it up
Something reminded me of this story (that I read almost 5 years ago)...
I checked to see if it was ever finished.. even looked up the author (ShiggyMoto).
Looks like he never wrote any more to it.
Shame, it was/is a GREAT story, just didn't end correctly. (unanswered things...)