OK boys, as some one who has participated in countless modeling sessions I want to make some good faith comments, ok?
1. First of all, thank you NO, the efforts you did to obtain this shot was surely hard, so I think you deserve claps for it!
2. I heard some day -I think it was Ron Harris or Sergei Skokov- that the photographer must find the unique characteristics of a nude model and work from there. The set construction & the modeling screenplay must be done with those in mind. In this case I think the unique characteristics of Nora are:
a) Those beautiful big green eyes (so you need a color combination according to those)
b) The look that she impress on them (so you must try to take advantage of that sorrowful/angry looks)
c) A square face with a nice barbel (so the makeup must go accordingly & you must do a lot of close ups of it)
d) Small tits & a skinny body (so you can try to adjust her likeness to a youthful appearance)
There are a lot of BAD choices here:
a) You used an scenery not appropriate for that screenplay. The abandoned warehouse type is fine for some bondage and sado shots, not this chaste type of shots!
b) It is inexcusable that the girl has half of the nails done!!!! (unless you will explain why on subsequent sets!)
c) Those shoes are crap!! They are not fancy not even nice, dear!! You don't need platform-heeled shoes in a shot with just one standing model!
d) That dress is really awful!! No man could want to unwrap anything shrouded on that!!!
e) I can't see any VG mark around!!!
So, I think it is a good start & a big effort, but honestly it looks as if you picked up the first whore on the street to do this, dear!!
Sorry, but I'm usually deathly honest, dear. It is a whore's thing.
I give the set a good 7!!!